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Monday, July 9, 2007
reDeFyne



Blog Being Reviewed: reDeFyne
Reviewed By: Diva Dee


At First Glance: 5 posts in the last 2 months? What am I doing here?

Template/Design: The site is jacked up in IE... but it looks ok in Firefox and Mozilla. Standard template, and it's been fiddled with a bit to give the background some oomph!

Content: I have no fucking clue what this blog is about, why the author is blogging, or what the purpose of all this randomness is. I figured out he is a 20-something male from Singapore. It is very hard to read most of the time because of the language barrier. Words often don't translate correctly from one language to the other, and it makes for a lot of mumbo jumbo that means nothing to me.

I do, however, get to see what books he's recently enjoyed, as well as movies and music he's recently seen and heard. Ask me if I really give a shit about that, though.

What is the first thing I would change about this blog? How much time do you have? I couldn't honestly pick just one.

What is the best feature of this blog? I got nothin'.

Rating: 1 for the template being decent.

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12 Comments:

Anonymous Observation Guy says...

You guys need to spruce up your blog a bit- template sucks ass and your content is like an 8th grader's.

Get a life! This blog sucks ass big time! bwahahaha! And you have the balls to critique other blogs? WHAT A JOKE!!!

7/09/2007 1:11 PM  
Blogger Ryan Lawson says...

People still use the phrase "get a life"?

Jesus Christ...

7/09/2007 3:05 PM  
Blogger Diva Dee says...

Apparently only those posting anonymous comments.

7/09/2007 3:09 PM  
Anonymous Observation Guy says...

Just curious, did you just decide to wake up and create a critique blog? "I Talk Too Much" already has done that. You bite off other people's idea, when in fact, you hardly have an audience.

I use "get a life" when people actually need one. Oh, and get a job.

Losers.

P.S. If you didn't want anyone posting anonymously, then why did you leave the option open?

Morons.

7/09/2007 3:33 PM  
Anonymous Observation Guy says...

P.S. This blog you've critiqued is a helluva lot better than yours! Take a lesson or two from him...

7/09/2007 3:36 PM  
Blogger Ryan Lawson says...

The Observation Guy Arsenal:

"Get a life"

"Get a job"

"Loser"

"Moron"

"Uh, uh...fag"

"Uh, uhm, uh...loser"

"Jerk!"

Awesome, man. It's like reading the diary of a fourteen-year-old that just got stood up.

Good work.

By the by, anonymously trashing ANYTHING shows a powerful lack of sack; it's like sucker-punching someone in the nuts.

As such, I will now refer to you as Nutsack.

You're welcome.

7/09/2007 4:13 PM  
Blogger Zhu says...

Wow, some people need holidays... and not the girls !

I agree, the blog is hard to read. I feel bad cause I blog in English as well and it's not my first language, but people understand me fine. It's quite a challenge to blog in another language... and it doesn't work quite well here.

7/09/2007 7:30 PM  
Blogger utenzi says...

Nutsack does seem to have some issues. There's not much going on with the reDeFyne blog. It's difficult to understand why the fellow bothered to submit it.

7/09/2007 10:06 PM  
Blogger Sparky Duck says...

No worries, I bet Observation Guy is like 12 and thinking of new ways to masturbate

7/09/2007 10:57 PM  
Blogger FRIGGA says...

LoL - I find even these comments are far more interesting then the blog reviewed :P (Funny as they are, that's not saying much)

7/10/2007 10:44 AM  
Blogger reDeFyne says...

Hahaha... Thanks for the feedback. The comments are more interesting than the review of the blog too. you girls deserve another break! hell yes! take the week off!

Btw i'm not translating from any language, although i do use some Singlish for humor, which could be why miss Diva Dee couldn't comprehend, though most of it is written in simple ENGLISH.

Its just a personal blog, i blog for my own self expression once in a while. I just wanted a neutral's opinion/review of my writing, from an outsider just out of curiosity.

Maybe you could reject submissions from blogs that are not in American English yeah? It'll save time for reviewer and the reviewed.

Now ask me if i give a shit about the Diva and her "dishing it out".

And as far as anonymity and being chicken shits go, you ladies could do better then the comic caricatures and nicknames as valid "identities" yourselves. Peace.

7/12/2007 3:01 AM  
Blogger Chatty Chicka says...

My goodness, we've had some fireworks here, haven't we? Nutsack was cute, in a "i'm a pathetic little loser who likes to stir shit with one hand and play with my winkie with the other" kind of way, wasn't he?

Golly gee, redefyne is a bit testy though, eh? Just remember, YOU submitted the blog to US, so make like a BIG BOY and suck it up, poopsie... But hey! On the bright side, Nutsack LOVES your blog, so YAY! You have a fan!

7/12/2007 9:36 AM  

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